As I grabbed my sweater to go to school I
made sure to not forget my Walkman. It was a bright sunny Monday morning, and
the weather still felt like it was summer. It seemed that it would take a long
time for Winter to arrive. Today it was essential to bring my Walkman because today
was the day that Madonna was going to release her new album “Like a Virgin.” My
plan was to go to the store afterschool and purchase a cassette. When I arrived
at school there were so many different emotions written across people’s faces.
Not only did I see sadness and tiredness in many people, but there were some
individuals who I saw constantly smiling. It was very unusual to see smiles
during the first period of class on a Monday. Some of those smiles were indeed
because of the excitement about the new album being released this afternoon.
The smiles I saw quickly turned into anxiousness, and I got to stare into many
of my peers’ eyes to see the impatience nature within them. I looked forward to
the release of the album, but I wasn’t too crazy about it. In fact, I was more
anxious about having an exam on a Monday morning. When it came around to the
last period lunch I was on my way to the cafeteria so relieved to finally feed
the monster that was growling inside my stomach. Some of my friends and I
grabbed our lunches, sat down onto the uncomfortable cafeteria seats, and
before I knew it my ears exploded with the yelling of others. Everyone was
yelling out that there was someone right outside the school that was selling cassettes
for the new album. My friends and I knew this would be our best shot in hearing
the album before anyone else does so we agreed that at least one of us had to
buy it. Soon after we quickly ran outside and pushed through a crowd of people
to buy the cassette. I was the one who managed to buy one of the cassettes among
my group of friends so we walked back into the building and started listening
to the album. After all of us heard the song that was named after the album “Like
a Virgin” everyone was really confused as to the meaning of the song. Some
people believed that it was just Madonna singing about an experienced man
giving his love to her, but others like me believed otherwise. There was a very
deep emotional message I believe she was trying to sing about. I gathered up a
large crowd of people and gave them my interpretation. I told them “Let me tell
you what ‘Like a Virgin’ is about…” “It's
about a girl who's experiencing something she's never felt before, like when
she had sex for the first time” I said. “Something eventful in her life that's
as big or bigger than when she lost her virginity. So, in this case it’s most
likely love, happiness, and a feeling of being complete. Feelings that she's
never felt with anyone else before.” After that tiny speech there was
laughter among many of my peers. I could see that some people agreed with me,
but mostly everyone was just coming up with their own nonsensical
interpretation of the song. After a couple minutes a couple students came up to
me and said, “No Let me tell you what ‘Like a Virgin’ is about…” When I heard
that I regretted stating my interpretation of the song as I so desperately did
not want to hear another one.
Dear Gio,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you were able to work in the line of dialogue here, which wasn't an easy feat, especially since you weren't familiar with the artist or song and it looks like you have also tried to keep the cultural/social context (cassette tapes), which isn't easy to do. You also keep us in scene for the most part. I had a couple of questions, such as whether or not the narrator was male or female and if you understood or could show us why this song/artist was so important to him/here. In reading this aloud, did it seem to you like a story that a character would share out loud? That's part of the challenge of this exercise--in finding a way to write the text so that it sounds like authentic speech.
I liked how you used the walkman as an indicator for having cassette tapes and making the story the time period when Madonna's song came out. It was an interesting and cool approach. I also enjoy how you explained the deeper meaning behind the song through the main characters thoughts.
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